.
so patiently does
oblivion wait for me
as I wait for you
.
bravely tempting – fate!
come and catch me – I’m calling
time through your fingers
.
shadow existence
oh – come again in a breath:
gone in a heart-beat!
.
Contributed to the haiku-heights theme: Death
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WOW! Each is a gem and together they reveal a waiting death.
The last two lines “come again in a breath, gone in a heartbeat”, capture the deathly wait. great composition
I love the words you used for this piece… oblivion is a favorite… 🙂
I’m writing my haiku heights on my blogspot blog.
http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-trust.html
Eliz
Each one is brilliant! Last one left me thinking!
I too echo all the other comments. Particularly love the last.
Well done. Thank you for sharing.